So, I'm working on the Changeling Game..

[alpharaposa]

And I'm designing the website. Slowly, painfully.

I'm asking for opinions. Go look at it, then tell me what you think. Tell me what it needs, what I need to get rid of, or just what needs to be moved or changed.

http://summerseas.avalonsoutpost.org/index.html

Comments

[aefenglommung.livejournal.com]

Not bad.

Off-topic: I was looking for Christmas images to make a holiday userpic, but got distracted by Scrooge -- Ebenezer, then McDuck. So, here's my latest userpic.

Great minds think alike.

[stryck.livejournal.com]

I was hoping for more nit picks than not bad. *G* But I'll take the compliment.

All that time looking up Shakespeare quotes has driven me to make a new icon. Whaddya think?

[aefenglommung.livejournal.com]

I like it. What play is that from?

But as for your changeling scenario, I don't know what to say. The layout is good, but I couldn't judge anything else. I think you had just created the front page?

And, anyway, I'm no judge of LARPing.

I'm thinking of launching a new AD&D campaign after Christmas, to meet here in E-ville. When I get it all ready, I'll be putting some stuff up -- probably on LJ: maps and such.

[stryck.livejournal.com]

It's from Love's Labour's Lost.

I've created the index and also a character page (Dramatis Personae) and the beginning of a players page. The forum (Bans and Bulletins) is phpBB stuff- ready made, just unpack and run a couple programs to get going.

The layout is what I'm worried over. I know what needs to go on there, but I want it to look good.

[zeeth_kyrah]

I suspect that if you divided the link groupings with further titles, the page would feel more balanced - the quoted verses have varying lengths, after all. Here are my title suggestions: "Scripts and Playbills" and "Actors and Stagehands".

[stryck.livejournal.com]

Not all links are in place, yet, actually. I've been trying to figure out what to call the bunch of setting/rule stuff that we posted for the benefit of those without the books.

Oaths and titles, that sort of thing.

Also need an 'about' link, to a page that tells people who have no idea what's going on what is actually going on.